C&C please, trying my hand at taking shots of something that isn't my children...

Started Jan 29, 2013 | Discussions thread
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Gman58 Contributing Member • Posts: 863
Re: C&C please, trying my hand at taking shots of something that isn't my children...

Erik, my two cents.  I'm just not sure what you are trying to say with #1. I guess you are attempting to portray an interesting visual of the repeating pattern of the crosses. And even though the background is OOF, the photo still seems to lack depth. Maybe experimenting with different points of view would have been interesting. I like the flag shot. Possibly cropping so as to move flag to R side of photo would be better, but I would keep some of the bottom of the photo- the blue on bottom is a nice complement to blue in flag. #3 is nicely composed. You have a good eye if you've never shot anything but kids.

Cheers Gman

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