A syntactic portrait!

Started Dec 6, 2012 | Discussions thread
tony field Veteran Member • Posts: 8,974
Re: A syntactic portrait!

l_objectif wrote:


I very much like the interpretation.  The surrealistic pointillism makes this into a very captivating portrait.  Very nice choice of tonality and textire/

Two things bother me - there is a horizontal "white/light" line across her nose - I find my eyes drawn to this.  The strong clarity of the lips/eyes do not seem to quite fit (this is noticeable when viewed "full size" however is much subdued when viewed small - visually I prefer it viewed small).

I wonder if the dark pointillism effect that is at "hair level" is appropriate?  Seems to me that the area around the hair should be "lighter" and the area around the shoulders "darker" (i.e. as though you flipped the pointillism top to bottom)?

Just my musing on an excellent image.....

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