Leaf pic. for CC
Thanks you guys so much for the comments. I think I understanding what you guys are says. Essentially, the subject is not clear enough and there is not enough of a story being told with the composition. These two things seem to be somewhat tied together.
I made a crop of the image and it seems to correct these issues at least somewhat. (Obviously, it would be better if I could just retake the image)
|Smile by Olymguy|
from Ultra Asian Indian Female Faces
|Space Shuttle Cockpit- by vbuhay|
from Aircraft Control Stick