Alternative Rules of Composition

Started Oct 29, 2012 | Discussions thread
nathaniel m Regular Member • Posts: 377
Re: Alternative Rules of Composition

I see what you are trying to do here, and I like the concept. Ultimately, I think the lighting failed you. The way it's lit make the image come across as very flat. If I wasn't told to look for composition, the dull overall look wouldn't keep me looking long enough to notice those cool details (the lines are actually horizontal, but the car isnt; tree coming out of car; etc.)

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