dominika no. 2 ( careful: contains nudity )

Started Jun 15, 2012 | Discussions thread
jmiller1948 Contributing Member • Posts: 901
Re: dominika no. 2 ( careful: contains nudity )

epsilon sigma taph wrote:

To me this shot is flawed in the following ways.

1. The suitcases are an ugly distraction in terms of composition, particularly the way they are stacked. Maybe just one on the floor or bed, opened with a bra draped over it might have made more sense.

2. The model's pose is not right in terms of the setting. She is standing there like a prancing horse. It just doesn't look right next to an unmade bed in a hotel room.

3. Being black and white, we lose her from the ankles down against the floor rug and you've even cut off her toes.

I certainly was not distracted by the suitcases!

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