Critique. If you will.
This is my first time asking for a critique but please, don't hold back. While I was waiting for the bus to work this morning, with not much to do or think about, I found myself gazing into a play park that was empty. It was 7am after all. I then thought to myself, how sad play parks look when there is nobody in them enjoying them - particularly swings. Swings look especially depressed when not in motion and they need fun to come alive. So this evening, I visited the park and tried to capture my thoughts. To you, does this picture capture them. To me, it isn't quite what my thoughts had in mind. I think it needs less sun. You don't hear that very often. I feel that it needs a dull day to capture the depressed mood I was aiming for but I am interested to read what others think.