One of my best to date!

Started Jul 20, 2008 | Discussions thread
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Kabe Luna
Kabe Luna Veteran Member • Posts: 9,491
Nice snapshot.

And I love the snapshot aesthetic (as evident in my own work), so please don't take offense. However, I can't help thinking how much more interesting this shot would have been with less of the background, which really doesn't contribute anything to the image. What if you'd cropped very tightly, with the plane just recognizable as such, being held by your son's hands, with his enthusiastic gaze in sharp focus beyond?

That's my $0.02.
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