fashion shoot critique

Started May 29, 2008 | Discussions thread
Ravitej Khalsa
Ravitej Khalsa Senior Member • Posts: 1,114
Hair too loose

Lighting and background very good. BD just slightly hot, but it's also a look. Model poses well. The only caveat is the hair. It's just a little too messy. With the slick look of the lighting, background, wardrobe, make-up and pose, the hair gets in the way with it's messy quality. Just a little out of place. If a simple brushing had been applied, it would have matched the other elements a little more for a stunning photo. As an Art Director, I would have asked the stylist to smooth the hair some to fit better.

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