Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules)

Challenge #29 in the Photos - miscelaneous topics series. Hosted by barb_s.
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Enter this challenge with a photograph containing 3 objects. It can be anything from a still life, to an outdoor shot, or action photo, but it must have 3 things in it. You, as well as any DP review member are encouraged to critique entries by adding comments on how you think the image could be improved. The entrant, after reading comments may opt to make modifications, and replace the first photo if they think the suggestions have merit. Simply upload a revised photo, please leave the original in your gallery, withdraw the first from this challenge, and immediately re-enter with your modified photo. this must be done before the challenge goes to vote.
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Revised version. Original here: http://www.dpreview.com/galleries/2289758264/photos/2359963/20121220_clarinet_3holes_jkube Basically, I changed the background. Not sure, if that's really better.
Submitted: Tuesday, 25th December, 2012 15:49 (GMT)
Taken: Tuesday, 25th December, 2012
Focal length: 100 mm
Shutter speed: 1/60 sec
Aperture: F6.3
ISO: 3200
Notes: Handheld (both Cam and Clarinet) about 30cm above our dinner table.
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