Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules)

Challenge #29 in the Photos - miscelaneous topics series. Hosted by barb_s.
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Enter this challenge with a photograph containing 3 objects. It can be anything from a still life, to an outdoor shot, or action photo, but it must have 3 things in it. You, as well as any DP review member are encouraged to critique entries by adding comments on how you think the image could be improved. The entrant, after reading comments may opt to make modifications, and replace the first photo if they think the suggestions have merit. Simply upload a revised photo, please leave the original in your gallery, withdraw the first from this challenge, and immediately re-enter with your modified photo. this must be done before the challenge goes to vote.
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first presentation of objects Planned improvements: Lighting: I like the highlight on the iron but the shadows are nastier than I expected judging from the display surface of floor / background - color setting a bit dull placement of objects?
Submitted: Saturday, 22nd December, 2012 21:24 (GMT)
Taken: Friday, 14th December, 2012
Focal length: 20 mm
Shutter speed: 1/125 sec
Aperture: F4
ISO: 200
Notes: flash used - poor light F4 to allow (almost) sufficient depth of field OC148669s (shrinked)
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