Still life - retake - and chat

It's a funny one. I like the consistent white field. Nice concept, deliberate.

I like it mostly, it's an original take on still life.
Agree to what's been said.
More focus on the car, without it being tack sharp, would help.
I find it's red-going-pink color a bit off.
Another thing is the figurine - its not very pretty - especially the paint is not very good - luckily it's pose is very expressive, which makes the image. Not the photographers fault of course, but its one of those rules when doing macro's and close ups: you try to get all the detail you can in the image, but sometimes forget if the detail that's there is good enough in itself. So cleaning the subject, embellishing it come into play.

Kind of a table-top Leica street photography look - cute.

The only change I suggest is to see if the whole shadow of the manikin could be caught. The DOF to my eye is in keeping with the subject matter and the whole concept works for me. I think you captured the shot exactly as planned!

This is a cute idea! -But I do agree with the others regarding the composition and DOF. I would follow their suggestions, but I would also be inclined to frame this so that there was enough space to have the reflections of the objects as part of the composition (here the foreground figure's reflection is cut off by the bottom frame). In a large amount of negative space such as this shot has, the reflections are just as important as the objects themsleves. That said, I hope you'll have time to make the changes before this phase of the challenge ends later today....I would love to see where you go with this one! :)

I agree with amitabhkumar and gerry328 for the DOF. If your composition here was based on the third rule, I would have placed the car a little higher(when in focus, obviously!) at the same height of the figures' head.

Poor Depth Of Field (DOF).