Perfect Hopper! Almost...
Try another version by superimposing a portion of the other frame -(http://www.dpreview.com/Articles/Files/6725685799/_DSC2456.jpg)to use his downward expression along with the reflection of the other man. That captures Hopper as his art was about uncommunicative strangers.
I'd keep the red light in the background as i think it adds context to the image.