znieh

znieh

Lives in Germany Berlin, Germany
Joined on Mar 31, 2008

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On Light Painting in the Light Painting challenge (2 comments in total)

Smart idea how you included the light brush itself.

Direct link | Posted on Jan 13, 2013 at 08:03 UTC as 1st comment
On Softtail Deluxe in the Light Painting challenge (2 comments in total)

Good work, and a very attractive object aswell as the background.

Direct link | Posted on Jan 13, 2013 at 08:00 UTC as 2nd comment
On St Catherine's Chapel in the Light Painting challenge (1 comment in total)

I like the idea, and I like the picture. Has a very nice mood. A pity there were so many sandbags distributed in this challenge.

Direct link | Posted on Jan 13, 2013 at 07:58 UTC as 1st comment
On Funny Bear in the What Is This? – II. challenge (9 comments in total)

Of course! This was too easy, next time I'll make it harder ;-)

Direct link | Posted on Jan 3, 2013 at 05:22 UTC as 1st comment
On Silent Tears in the Tears. challenge (2 comments in total)

Thanks Mick, I appreciate your feedback, and to the other guys glad about the encouraging votes.

Direct link | Posted on Jan 2, 2013 at 20:51 UTC as 1st comment
On 3 Jumps in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Nice job.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:58 UTC as 1st comment
On Three Drops in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (8 comments in total)

Very nice now, pure.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:57 UTC as 5th comment

Looks very nice.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:56 UTC as 1st comment
On 3 Swans in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Anatoli, if you reduce dark even more you may get close to what you mean (sense of outer space). Water is still (too) visible. - The swans have potential to reduce the white to see more detail of the feathers (reduce highlights). You may also consider to switch to b&w and crop (a little) as Zhaark advised.
Just try it for yourself and then judge. :-)

Direct link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:55 UTC as 1st comment | 1 reply
On Autumn Gems in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (5 comments in total)

Very nice shot and colors. CG33's is a good advice.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:48 UTC as 2nd comment
On Pumpkins in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Nice colors. I don't think the vignette should be applied so intensively here. The objects are quite strong in their exposure compared to the background. Maybe they were brush-masked to lighten them up. That's ok (if so) but they look like taken out of their context (little bit artificial). Less may be more here, particularly because the wooden floor is really nice and should get more attention. I think the right balance is your task.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:31 UTC as 4th comment

Nice shot, hard to find something to improve. Maybe you could play a little more with the light to make the objects look more three-dimensional (contrast, lighting). You see, like the reflection of the yellow one, it has a certain strength that you should apply to the object itself. Also valid for the small ones. Just looking for something ;-)

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:21 UTC as 6th comment
On 3 Above in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (3 comments in total)

Interesting shot, could be a submission for the "What is this" challenge. Don't know if you have the possibility to re-shoot to get at least one of the three objects more in focus.This would make a nicy contrast to the blurred background. About the composition I think it's good.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:12 UTC as 3rd comment
On Triplets in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Inrteresting shot. Maybe you find ways to elaborate the structure of the bark (play with contrast, clarity, sharpness). You should also consider to make it b&W.
And the I would crop the sides just until they meet the trees on the upper part.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:09 UTC as 4th comment

I would also change the underground. Imagine some steel plate where you can see the reflections of the cars, like a mirror (but I wouldn't take a mirror). Agree with Epix to improve the lighting. Some side light could pronounce the details of especially the black car.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:02 UTC as 4th comment

Looks good. Maybe a small thought: I liked the way the stipes were showing each in a singular direction on the other 3 apples in this challenge. Could be good for your picture, too, if you turn the green apple clockwise some amount.

edit: Also I would still crop a little on each side.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:55 UTC as 1st comment

looks better now

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:51 UTC as 5th comment

Very attractive watches, sure a good hint to see them all within focus. Do you think you can get rid of at least some amount of the light-blue reflection on the middle watch? The numbers on the clock face are so cute, and the reflection is catching the eye a little bit too much.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:50 UTC as 1st comment
On 3 Windows in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (5 comments in total)

Agree. It could make the foto simplier and stronger.

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:42 UTC as 3rd comment

Dito. In this view it is not a problem, but looking full size you may want to eliminate some of the reflections around the eyes (only the smaller ones - the biggest one on each eye looks interesting in this view, almost natural).

Direct link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:40 UTC as 1st comment
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