znieh

Lives in Germany Berlin, Germany
Joined on Mar 31, 2008

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On photo Light Painting in the Light Painting challenge (2 comments in total)

Smart idea how you included the light brush itself.

Link | Posted on Jan 13, 2013 at 08:03 UTC as 1st comment
On photo Softtail Deluxe in the Light Painting challenge (2 comments in total)

Good work, and a very attractive object aswell as the background.

Link | Posted on Jan 13, 2013 at 08:00 UTC as 2nd comment
On photo St Catherine's Chapel in the Light Painting challenge (1 comment in total)

I like the idea, and I like the picture. Has a very nice mood. A pity there were so many sandbags distributed in this challenge.

Link | Posted on Jan 13, 2013 at 07:58 UTC as 1st comment
On photo Funny Bear in the What Is This? – II. challenge (9 comments in total)

Of course! This was too easy, next time I'll make it harder ;-)

Link | Posted on Jan 3, 2013 at 05:22 UTC as 1st comment
On photo Silent Tears in the Tears. challenge (2 comments in total)

Thanks Mick, I appreciate your feedback, and to the other guys glad about the encouraging votes.

Link | Posted on Jan 2, 2013 at 20:51 UTC as 1st comment
On photo 3 Jumps in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Nice job.

Link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:58 UTC as 1st comment
On photo Three Drops in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (8 comments in total)

Very nice now, pure.

Link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:57 UTC as 5th comment

Looks very nice.

Link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:56 UTC as 1st comment
On photo 3 Swans in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Anatoli, if you reduce dark even more you may get close to what you mean (sense of outer space). Water is still (too) visible. - The swans have potential to reduce the white to see more detail of the feathers (reduce highlights). You may also consider to switch to b&w and crop (a little) as Zhaark advised.
Just try it for yourself and then judge. :-)

Link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:55 UTC as 1st comment | 1 reply
On photo Autumn Gems in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (5 comments in total)

Very nice shot and colors. CG33's is a good advice.

Link | Posted on Dec 24, 2012 at 10:48 UTC as 2nd comment
On photo Pumpkins in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Nice colors. I don't think the vignette should be applied so intensively here. The objects are quite strong in their exposure compared to the background. Maybe they were brush-masked to lighten them up. That's ok (if so) but they look like taken out of their context (little bit artificial). Less may be more here, particularly because the wooden floor is really nice and should get more attention. I think the right balance is your task.

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:31 UTC as 4th comment
On photo Red Gold and Green in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (6 comments in total)

Nice shot, hard to find something to improve. Maybe you could play a little more with the light to make the objects look more three-dimensional (contrast, lighting). You see, like the reflection of the yellow one, it has a certain strength that you should apply to the object itself. Also valid for the small ones. Just looking for something ;-)

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:21 UTC as 6th comment
On photo 3 Above in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (3 comments in total)

Interesting shot, could be a submission for the "What is this" challenge. Don't know if you have the possibility to re-shoot to get at least one of the three objects more in focus.This would make a nicy contrast to the blurred background. About the composition I think it's good.

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:12 UTC as 3rd comment
On photo Triplets in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (4 comments in total)

Inrteresting shot. Maybe you find ways to elaborate the structure of the bark (play with contrast, clarity, sharpness). You should also consider to make it b&W.
And the I would crop the sides just until they meet the trees on the upper part.

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:09 UTC as 4th comment

I would also change the underground. Imagine some steel plate where you can see the reflections of the cars, like a mirror (but I wouldn't take a mirror). Agree with Epix to improve the lighting. Some side light could pronounce the details of especially the black car.

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 13:02 UTC as 4th comment
On photo Three Apples II in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (1 comment in total)

Looks good. Maybe a small thought: I liked the way the stipes were showing each in a singular direction on the other 3 apples in this challenge. Could be good for your picture, too, if you turn the green apple clockwise some amount.

edit: Also I would still crop a little on each side.

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:55 UTC as 1st comment
On photo Changing of the Guard in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (5 comments in total)

looks better now

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:51 UTC as 5th comment

Very attractive watches, sure a good hint to see them all within focus. Do you think you can get rid of at least some amount of the light-blue reflection on the middle watch? The numbers on the clock face are so cute, and the reflection is catching the eye a little bit too much.

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:50 UTC as 1st comment
On photo 3 Windows in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (5 comments in total)

Agree. It could make the foto simplier and stronger.

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:42 UTC as 3rd comment
On photo Three cows on a wall in the Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules) challenge (3 comments in total)

Dito. In this view it is not a problem, but looking full size you may want to eliminate some of the reflections around the eyes (only the smaller ones - the biggest one on each eye looks interesting in this view, almost natural).

Link | Posted on Dec 21, 2012 at 12:40 UTC as 1st comment
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