ysal

ysal

Lives in United States Los Angeles Suburb, CA, United States
Works as a Engineer
Joined on Mar 8, 2011

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On Blossom in the Spring in the rule of thirds and chat challenge (10 comments in total)

Very pretty spring image, but I don't quite see the subjects falling in the "thirds" grid.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 26, 2012 at 00:58:00 UTC as 7th comment
On Spring in Savigny-lès-Beaune in the Spring in the rule of thirds and chat challenge (2 comments in total)

This is a very pretty, soothing image, but I also have to agree that it is not very spring-like.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 26, 2012 at 00:55:42 UTC as 1st comment
On P3067393 in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (7 comments in total)

I was also going to say to bring up the colors outside, but this gives an interesting "old" look. Tough one to comment on, can't quite put my finger on how to improve. Maybe too much, or too little dark wall around the window.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 17, 2012 at 13:47:23 UTC as 1st comment
On Amaryllis 2a in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (5 comments in total)

Niiiiice!!

Direct link | Posted on Mar 16, 2012 at 20:36:14 UTC as 3rd comment

I think it would look prettier if you increase the saturation and bring out the red in the plant and blue of the sky.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 16, 2012 at 06:34:32 UTC as 1st comment | 1 reply
On P3067393 in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (7 comments in total)

Has a nostalgic look to it, very interesting image.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 16, 2012 at 06:32:19 UTC as 3rd comment
On Abandoned in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (4 comments in total)

Very nice shot, I can't really see a way to improve the composition.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 15, 2012 at 12:43:06 UTC as 4th comment
On Hondura´s Guardian in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (6 comments in total)

I also like the angle, but both your title and description talks about the statue which is the OOF part in the background. I think it would be dramatic to see the statue from this angle, in focus, with the blurry pink flowers at it's feet.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 14, 2012 at 14:24:24 UTC as 5th comment
On Amaryllis, Second Version in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (8 comments in total)

A very different look and I also like the leaves balancing the overall shot. The support stick in the middle still distracts me a bit.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 14, 2012 at 14:19:23 UTC as 5th comment | 1 reply
On railway track in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (7 comments in total)

I also agree that there is too much going on here. I would try cropping horizontal across the sky just below the dark pole at the upper left, and maybe crop to just left of the standing person. Maybe make the main track convergence point the 1/3 point.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 12, 2012 at 18:58:03 UTC as 6th comment
On landscape in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (8 comments in total)

The tree being right in the center bothers me a bit, also the strange halo around it and the branches in the upper right. The foreground rocks seem a bit too bright and vivid compared to the rest of the image.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 12, 2012 at 18:53:46 UTC as 5th comment
On Amaryllis, first version in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (8 comments in total)

Very nice shot, I like it a lot. The green leaf at the lower right does not bother me at all, but the tan colored stick in the center distracts me.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:59:41 UTC as 6th comment
On Power of Life.. in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (4 comments in total)

Yes, very cool shot, but can you post the rules you followed?

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:56:31 UTC as 3rd comment
On Zion River in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (11 comments in total)

I think the previous post nailed it right on. It is a gorgeous shot, but too many things are sharp and too evenly lit. The large rock in the front is distracting to me, maybe darken it at bit? The blue waterfall is the focus here.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:55:44 UTC as 10th comment
On Departure in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (10 comments in total)

I like the shot very much, although I'm not sure either if it is following the 1/3 rule. The blurred background does not bother me at all, brings your eyes immediately to the two subjects up front. I do with the couple was bit sharper and colors more vivid. Also, maybe crop out the gray vertical wall along the left edge?

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:53:19 UTC as 6th comment
On On The Edge in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (9 comments in total)

Gorgeous shot!!! And I would also crop out about two sections of the orange thing to the right. I like the shot very much.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:48:22 UTC as 4th comment
On shadows on the wall in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (9 comments in total)

It's a very nice shot, although I'm having trouble finding a focal point of the image, seems a bit unorganized. How about cropping out the strong vertical window frame to the right?

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:46:47 UTC as 6th comment
On Blackpool View in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (10 comments in total)

Like CG33 said, the photo is well balanced and very interesting. I actually like the tower to the left, as if the road points to it.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:43:00 UTC as 7th comment
On IMG_7904 NO PHOTOSHOP in the Advanced compostions and chat challenge (10 comments in total)

Beautiful shot. Hard to improve, but perhaps crop out bit more of the empty space to the right, placing end of pier closer to the "1/3" position.

Direct link | Posted on Mar 11, 2012 at 17:41:18 UTC as 6th comment
On Evening Tea (cropped) in the Negative space and chat challenge (14 comments in total)

Lovely image, I'd leave it alone!

Direct link | Posted on Mar 3, 2012 at 04:28:25 UTC as 8th comment
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