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the way the earbud looks like she's swinging it around in circles is rather nice. your framing seems kind of arbitrary. there's too much room behind the woman for the composition to be about their...

a very nice graphic moment, frank.

very nice expressions--

hard not to like this pair. although they don't especially go together for me, they are each so interesting in their own right that the overall picture becomes very engaging. i like the way the...

hey photoeng- i think the couple and the corner are improved. i think the brightness on the boat and in the center of the photo generally is too intense--the whites look blown out now, where before...

i suspect it could be valuable to learn to shoot with your non-dominant eye in a variety of ways, though i wouldn't wish the circumstances on you.  i tend to carry my camera, when it isn't all the...

whether you respect the individuals in the photos or not, the problem on display here is that you have failed to show any respect towards them or people like them. by posting photos like this in...

D feels like he hides his rage with L's friends well, and most of them pretend their affections are shared equally all around. Still, many encounters teeter on the brink of violence, a hearty...

L has very striking eyes. One of her oldest friends on broadway told me 'you should have seen her 15 years ago. she was the most beautiful woman around--everyone wanted to be with her.' Quite a few...

This installment is long coming, far from finished, and a little bit epic in the telling.  D and L have a storied, stormy romance, made rougher by living on the street. it is coming up on their...

that isn't the hand i was referring to, frank. the central figure's left hand. you know, the seriously weird one.  i don't find rf lacking in vision, nor in heart. quite the contrary. but...

a lot of us do not see it that way, frank--rf wasn't hitler.  really, you protest too much.  okay. you've missed focus again, frank, and not by a little bit. i suggest you devise a plan to work...

the first one has potential, but the motion blur and the confusion where his hand should be make problems for me. the second one seems to me like it should be framed further up, to follow the...

this is a gorgeous photo, solve. i would be tempted to title it wallflowers, but that would probably be silly. i kind of wish there were a third white-haired man's head over on the right edge to...

the second and fourth photos, esp the latter, stand out. the second one could be sharper, and maybe shot from lower to emphasize the momentary empathy with the little child. the last one is well...

I like the diagonal slash of light and the fact that since you can't see any faces directly, the fully delineated shadow figures become more salient.  I tend to like graphic use of shadows in color...

love the orange shoes, and there is clearly something interesting going on with the hair or something, but i can't see what it is. the expression is good though.

stop guy works well, but the sign just seems too high up on the slow side to complete the theme.