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mayurgogoi
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Assam, India
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I would use a white round cricket ball in the left --the cup plate is not so gud!pl use a light source and a white object.
You will win!
Revolutionaries of different country must be acceptable--if not it should be written very clearly before voting--
I like ur pics--So vibrant in colour and lighting!
Ohh So sharp!
amitabhkumar: the focus is much better this time but the landscape aspect ratio is better than this.The threads have taken much space and taking us away from the whistles.The brightness of the front whistle is also annoyiing.Try to diffuse bcoz the previous one was charming and this one harsher.
Yes dear--
I know that You will not like it!Without diagonal arrangement You can't get the blur that you need in a horizontal arrangement.
In fact --I too am not happy keeping aperture 1.8,I tried to keep @4 so that at least 2nd whistle comes more!But I failed due to lot of people during a festival.This is not taken under studio light.So I could not retake the shot now.Thanks for your comments --But if possibleI will try some other pics of whistles In a horizontal lines!
amitabhkumar: it needs cropping and also the front object is too bright and larger.The details are also not good .I am thinking that u wants to compare the life of urs with the object who is fixed over in a pole or something like.It needs some more background details .the object in the back also resembles the same fig but a different color.Do u want refer us to two different apects or personalities of human nature through the different colors, i am confused too.
Yes front subject must be larger than 2nd-/-true i want to explain 2 different personalities--so different colour--if i give back ground detail the emptiness will not remain--you know 'BLACK' represents the Mystery or emptyness in a life.Yes I can crop a little bit.When one man Asked I could not understand your Sculpture--nothing;Then famous Sculpture,artistsRam KInkar Baiz of Santi NIketan Kolkata replied,"Pl Go and again see the sculpture and tell me..."The visitor came and replied-"I have seen again and again surrounding your sculpture--but really I could not understand what you want to mean."Then Ram KInkar Baiz humbly told the visitor-"That That you watch my sculpture again and again and what you get the juice from seeing the sculpture that is the my aim and where you put your mind."
I heard this story told by one famous artists from Assam India.I must thank you--that you are trying what I am saying--and getting near--The empty space to right creating sense does some one left !
pitou250: Image size requirement not respected!
At full size there are a lot of compression artefacts and noise.
About the framing: the right figure is very close to the top and right border and there is too much empty space on the left and bottom.
The face is not very readable.
It misses some context or setting to make it a compelling still life: background, floor, surroundings... Something for the subject to relate to or stand out against.
I dont get a connection between the two figures, what's their relation, why are they different colors and size? I think with the title you want to tell something - but I'm not getting it.
Yes--This is still life--in fact this is a double exposure of same frame--It is the lamp posts in a dark garden--it ia coloured pencil top-you must research -if I say all the Art will die--The pencil is in different colour portrays 2 different people in different colour of lives!Empty space is kept intentionally-it gives the depth -You can not see a distant ship very clearly--red is far from Pink --The Image may DQ-but it is a kind of FINE ART!Simply u think 2 men is standing in a dark lonely park--doing struggle!But it is not Always necessary the back ground, floor etc to configure a Still life--this Pencil top has a black surrounding.black back ground--This Black represents the mystery of 2 lives participating here. Yes I could stand 3rd such Pencil Top to extreme Left--but it is not a easy task to calculate in a multi 2 exposure in a same frame of same Pencil!The pencil tip gives pink and Red colour light.Thanks fr ur comment.
Some pictures are coming with dances--but dances may not be Traditions or Rituals--they are not facing DQ!Why!
U r not great bustard!Our dear Bustard--I appreciate ur photo
You will get the winner!
ohh--what a multi colour frog--
Such shots are difficult in low ligts!great
colours--sharpness great!
3.5 out of 5---You missed the Ear of the cat...But I like ur pics
Incredible shot...may be the best shot in 2012 in dpreview--National geography will invite you soon---i think you should crop little to the left.
I like ur previous --cause our eyes goes on--3 dry leaves and mystical colours did it--though it is close[u may win too!] it is done by force--natural beauty is here less than the previous.
Great shot dear!