Pithy. Not much here. Seems to be the norm of this new feature at DPReview.
It is too short, needs lots of examples, and for gosh sakes talk about all the prep, the planning, the packing, transport of stuff. Not much here that I can read. I have written better.
Talk about the how, the what, the specific. Nothing here that would help anyone going on a travel adventure.
In sum, a blah blah blah article.