Angel Rose

Started Mar 26, 2014 | Photos
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Mark Kanawati Contributing Member • Posts: 612
Angel Rose
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Re: Angel Rose

Excellent mark.

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quadrox Senior Member • Posts: 1,094
Re: Angel Rose
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The following is meant to be constructive criticism:

  • Lighting is good - but a tiny bit underexposed.
  • Skin has been smoothed too much and looks like plastic.
  • I don't like the cut-off right shoulder, perhaps especially because we see a tiny bit of her dress there but nothing else
  • Framing in general is off/unbalanced somehow - leans too much to the right.
  • She looks bored.

Having said that, I couldn't have gotten anywhere near that good a shot myself.

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One Angel to another.
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johnierebel Senior Member • Posts: 1,759
Re: Angel Rose

quadrox wrote:

The following is meant to be constructive criticism:

  • Lighting is good - but a tiny bit underexposed.
  • Skin has been smoothed too much and looks like plastic.
  • I don't like the cut-off right shoulder, perhaps especially because we see a tiny bit of her dress there but nothing else
  • Framing in general is off/unbalanced somehow - leans too much to the right.
  • She looks bored.

Having said that, I couldn't have gotten anywhere near that good a shot myself.

I got to agree quadrox, the face was over done. Also looks like you pushed the saturation a little to much. Didn't like the pose either, didn't look natural?

Abu Mahendra Senior Member • Posts: 4,011
Re: Angel Rose

...but then very few of these posed, artificial lighting shots ever feel or look natural. Contrived is often the word.

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tdaubee
tdaubee Forum Member • Posts: 64
Re: Angel Rose

Beautiful shot.

If your looking for reconstructive criticism....  I tend to fade away from over-doing the face retouching. Nobody looks like porcelain. I would agree with the previous statement that maybe a little bit more of her dress should be shown on her right side.

It also really bugs me that her hanger straps are just hanging out.... If it was my images I would have took those off completely.

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