working on exposure /lighting

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rska2013
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working on exposure /lighting
9 months ago

c.c on lighting and exposure only please not the pose

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Please provide me constructive critique and criticism.
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In reply to rska2013, 9 months ago

At the very least there's some unattractive vignette going on in the upper corners.

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The subject exposure looks pretty good, close to Rembrandt. The fill might be a bit strong for my taste but not by much. You might let the lighting fall off a bit more from the face downward. The biggest problem is that the hair looks dull & dead. A hair light would fix that.

You said not the pose but lighting and posing go together. The pose has the subject broad lit, which makes his face look wider (fatter) than it really is. Rotating the face to the subject's left until the ear just disappears and adjusting the lighting to again give you Rembrandt lighting would give you short lighting and be more flattering.

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Don't let the dark upper corners worry you. When doing seamless white all you need to do is get a pure white halo around the subject. It is easy to fix the rest of the "white" area in post processing. Of course if you can get the lighting right so that all the background is around +0.8 ± 0.2 stops then you won't have to fix it in post processing.

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In reply to Sailor Blue, 9 months ago

Sailor Blue wrote:

T It is easy to fix the rest of the "white" area in post processing. Of course if you can get the lighting right so that all the background is around +0.8 ± 0.2 stops then you won't have to fix it in post processing.

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True, but these days it much easier to fix it in post,

instead of lighting the background proper ,which means additional flashes and equipment

to get it right.

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In reply to Sailor Blue, 9 months ago

Sailor Blue wrote:

The subject exposure looks pretty good, close to Rembrandt. The fill might be a bit strong for my taste but not by much. You might let the lighting fall off a bit more from the face downward. The biggest problem is that the hair looks dull & dead. A hair light would fix that.

You said not the pose but lighting and posing go together. The pose has the subject broad lit, which makes his face look wider (fatter) than it really is. Rotating the face to the subject's left until the ear just disappears and adjusting the lighting to again give you Rembrandt lighting would give you short lighting and be more flattering.

Sekonic - Frank Dispensa - Classical Posing and Portrait Lighting

Don't let the dark upper corners worry you. When doing seamless white all you need to do is get a pure white halo around the subject. It is easy to fix the rest of the "white" area in post processing. Of course if you can get the lighting right so that all the background is around +0.8 ± 0.2 stops then you won't have to fix it in post processing.

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thank you very much for the great suggestions.......i did some selfies i will post later playing with black back ground

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