Joselyn

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GMartin
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Re: Joselyn
In reply to GMartin, Mar 16, 2013

Wow, excellent !! And she is hot!!! How did you light this?

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In reply to GMartin, Mar 17, 2013

She needs some direction on posing, expressions, and hand positions. Thumb should be out away from fingers, not together. When the model is on her knees, you need a tripod effect for her legs so one isn't going underneath her at a bad angle. Tell her to keep her chin up, down looks bad. And work on the S curve. She's very attractive but obviously very new as well, this is a time when a good photographer takes responsibility for guiding the subject.

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In reply to lumigraphics, Mar 17, 2013

To add.. Knees apart, feet together in number three, corral the stray finger, and don't show the back of the hand. I'd probably ditch the jewelry too, it doesn't match the outfits and is overkill. Near miss with ducklips in number one

At this level of work, the details REALLY matter.

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In reply to GMartin, Mar 17, 2013

She is a beauty and you caught her very well.

The first picture has a special touch, a tempting expression and yes, too much jewelry. Her earrings do not fit the necklace, different styles and i would have removed her bracelet. The rest are minor tweaks, the missing thumb on her left hand in the first picture or the missing thumb on the her right hand in the last photo or the deep pit made by her right knee…. personal taste….

I am convinced she will be very happy with your work.

My fav is N°1 and i would like to see N°1 combined with the scenery of N°3

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Re: Joselyn
In reply to lumigraphics, Mar 18, 2013

Lol...really...uh ok.....lol....

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Re: Joselyn
In reply to lumigraphics, Mar 18, 2013

Well, when YOU work with  her, YOU can pose her your way...but since I shot it,

It's MY way ......but thanks for posting.......got some work that I can look at ?

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In reply to lumigraphics, Mar 18, 2013

Soooooo, wha's up with all of that cheesy clothing your models are wearing ?

Feather boas ? Fat legs showing ? Posing straight into the camera ? Dude, come on.....

You lack even the most basic posting techniques in your work......and it's all flat

potato mash lighting.......learn some real lighting techniques..lol....

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In reply to GMartin, Mar 18, 2013

All nicely posed and well lighted.  Great post work.

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In reply to GMartin, Mar 18, 2013

GMartin wrote:

Soooooo, wha's up with all of that cheesy clothing your models are wearing ?

Feather boas ? Fat legs showing ? Posing straight into the camera ? Dude, come on.....

You lack even the most basic posting techniques in your work......and it's all flat

potato mash lighting.......learn some real lighting techniques..lol....

So you post and then act butthurt when you get critiqued? That's funny right there.

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In reply to lumigraphics, Mar 20, 2013

Your 2nd photo is the best. The only distracting thing for me is her hair near the necklace. Great composition!

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Re: Joselyn
In reply to GMartin, Mar 22, 2013

Skin tones are beautiful, as are your models.  Something about the Canon colors that brings out "the magic".

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Re: Joselyn
In reply to GMartin, Mar 23, 2013

Love the colors and the light. Good work and beautiful model.

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