PART 2- This Week Through YOUR m4/3 2014.08.02 -PART 2

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FrankS009
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Re: Mellow Yellow
In reply to yyr, 3 months ago

Hmm... I think it does what I envisaged, making the focal point more distinct - there is benefit to that, I like the focus objects, both person and cylinder - but it would be at the cost of the richness of the "border" of the door. If you left a bit more of the surrounding panels in your crop to increase that part of the "tapestry" of the image, the "square" at the top left corner would become a rectangle and probably not look as good but the sense of perspective might improve. Not easy to balance, and keep all the aesthetic pieces that your warped mind dictates.

Here is a slight less cropped version. Am not sure if it is better, but I offer it anyway.

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