PART 2- This Week Through YOUR m4/3 2014.08.02 -PART 2

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yyr
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Re: Mellow Yellow

FrankS009 wrote:

An elegant photo, with a subtle focal point. I like the reflected figure(s). The GM1 did a great job.

As far as the composition is concerned ,I am always reluctant to suggest differences, but what would it look like if the panels serving as the border of the door (on the left and top) were cropped in half? That might pull the focal point (and the ghostly figure) a bit more into the foreground.

F.

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A belated 'thank you' Frank. Don't hesitate, to suggest - I asked for comments didn't I? Here's you're crop - what do you think? In the original there's a subtle little juxtaposition that appeals too my (warped?) mind. The building is Number 2 (it's faintly visible above the door) and there are 2 reflections - subtle but it makes me smile.

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