PART 2- This Week Through YOUR m4/3 2014.08.02 -PART 2

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FrankS009
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Re: Mellow Yellow
In reply to yyr, 4 months ago

An elegant photo, with a subtle focal point. I like the reflected figure(s). The GM1 did a great job.

As far as the composition is concerned ,I am always reluctant to suggest differences, but what would it look like if the panels serving as the border of the door (on the left and top) were cropped in half?  That might pull the focal point (and the ghostly figure)  a bit more into the foreground.

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