Portrait for critique

Started Aug 2, 2014 | Photos thread
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Portrait for critique

I had some interesting shadow opportunities with tree cover.  I made some minor adjustments using LR4.  Does this composition work?

 Canis's gear list:Canis's gear list
Pentax smc FA 50mm F1.4 Tamron SP AF 90mm F/2.8 Di Macro Pentax smc DA 18-55mm F3.5-5.6 AL WR Pentax smc DA 50-200mm F4-5.6 ED WR +2 more
Comment & critique:
Please provide me constructive critique and criticism.
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