Portfolio for film school
I agree with Klaus - more people photos. I too like the photo of the singer - good use of low camera angle.
But not too many slightly over exposed, low contrast photos. I'd include some action photos with strong vibrant color and sharp focus - maybe a sporting event or public gathering. Something like this:
https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2704/13203693335_2ca1c338e9_b.jpg (not my photo BTW)