*** This Week Through YOUR m4/3 2014.05.17 ***

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Wormsmeat
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Re: The Florida Keys

These show a great improvement over some of your earlier work in here. Don't take that badly - it's meant as a compliment.

The first shows a light touch, nothing in the frame that shouldn't be there. Good lead in from the bridge (or whatever you call those things spanning the Keys). Vanishing point, rule of thirds etc. Great shot.

The second is like a Pepsi advert - fantastic, although the distant boat is a slight downer.

No3 is a good un of its kind. Makes me want to be there.

No4 is a daring little number, good fun.

No5 is the weakest of the bunch, seems a bit flat. Maybe some selective brightening, maybe increase contrast and saturation here and there...

No6 is a good un of its kind. Makes me want to be there.

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