First Pics with X_E1

Started Apr 26, 2014 | Discussions thread
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Van du Nord
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Re: First Pics with X_E1
In reply to joseluisherranz, Apr 28, 2014

Hi Jose,

nice pictures, good start.

You ask some comments on composition. What I think about portrait number two as well as the accordeon player is that these pictures are centered. For me, here is no composition, this is shooting. Especially the ladies portrait, the head is given like the trophy of a hunter, or a soldier. As the lady is turned a little to the right, she should be a little in the left part of the image in order to open the image. And she is a too close, you "cut" her neck by shooting horizontally. Even if the eyes are beautiful and sharp, I would not keep this picture in my album.

The panoramic composition is good, the lady looks into the good direction and "opens" the panorama.

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Fujifilm X-E2 Fujifilm XF 60mm F2.4 R Macro Fujifilm XF 18-55mm F2.8-4 R LM OIS Fujifilm 50-230mm
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