The following is meant to be constructive criticism:
- Lighting is good - but a tiny bit underexposed.
- Skin has been smoothed too much and looks like plastic.
- I don't like the cut-off right shoulder, perhaps especially because we see a tiny bit of her dress there but nothing else
- Framing in general is off/unbalanced somehow - leans too much to the right.
- She looks bored.
Having said that, I couldn't have gotten anywhere near that good a shot myself.
I got to agree quadrox, the face was over done. Also looks like you pushed the saturation a little to much. Didn't like the pose either, didn't look natural?