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Michael L NYC 99
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Re: Hawks and more
In reply to Florida Nature Photographer, 7 months ago

The second of the hawk shots has the best composition for me, but none them seem super sharp when looking at the head. These could have been shot hand held, which would explain that. I also noticed that the eyes were closed in the third shot. I think birds look better with their eyes open and you see the glossy reflection from their eyes. The final shot doesn't do it for me. There is too much empty sky. Silhouetted buildings can be very interesting, but the skyline is such a thin strip here that it has little impact. There are elements to make a very good shot, but I would look for opportunities to make the silhouettes more prominent and varied (or unique) in shapes.

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Michael

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