* Wed C&C No Theme Thread #303 14 02 12 *

Started 10 months ago | Photos thread
Zindanfel
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Re: The corrected version..
In reply to LouHolland, 10 months ago

LouHolland wrote:

Zin, Well seen, but you forgot the lamp post on the right. I have also removed a bit of the blue cast to achive more clarity. Now it looks as cold as it was that morning, minus -3 degrees. Thanks for your comments Zin and here is the corrected version.

Lou

Zindanfel wrote:

The air looks as thick as in a pool hall, and as unmoving as in a tomb.

I'd be tempted to rotate slightly clockwise; the ship seems to list to the left. Off-vertical seems uncharacteristic for a moored vessel.

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Zin

Lou, I think your rework to "colder" is very effective; the stronger mood now recalls to me having worked in and visited similar places in such early quiet hours.

I didn't mention the intrusion of lamp in the upper right corner because I assumed it was a mere oversight.

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