How badly is this photo breaking the rules?

Started Apr 19, 2013 | Discussions thread
The Jacal
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Re: How badly is this photo breaking the rules?
In reply to Kleeks13, Apr 20, 2013

Kleeks13 wrote:

I like it...and actually the more I look at it, I love it.

Thanks.

However, there are two thin lines coming out of the guy's head....don't know if it is my dirty screen? wires from his ear phones? crack in the wall?  I'm learning from some comic book work I'm coloring:  "get rid of anything that interrupts the narrative"  If those lines aren't anything important, all you have to do is "stamp tool" out enough of the line to interrupt it...not the entire line.

It's not your screen...!

I agree with earlier comment about cropping.  I think just a tad would really strengthen.  Just play with your copping tool until you "feel it in your belly."  (quote from the movie, Rise of the Guardians). LOL

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