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Deepak Kaw
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Does this one work better?
In reply to xtoph, Mar 28, 2013

xtoph wrote:

this is a terrific subject, but there are a few things that hold it back from realizing its potential. the tight crop seems a bit cramped. the saturation may not need to be that high. most important, because the woman is looking out of the frame and we cannot see her face/eyes, the picture kind of runs into a dead end there; imagine what might happen if the two figures had been looking at each other, for instance, or even just if the woman were looking down at the child. i think that would have worked much better with your title.

so, not bad, but i those are things i think you could have improved.

thanks for posting.

Dear Christopher, does this one work better?

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