B&W with E-M5 and 9-18

Interesting scene, but I'm afraid the bench is a little *too* lonely here.  It's not clear what the subject of the composition is.  This is one of those times where a major re-think of the composition was probably your best bet.  Also, back way off the vignetting.  I like to play around in post, including adding a mild vignette, but this is too heavy.