Critique please

Hi. I did my first studio shoot with rented Nikon D800e and Canon mark III. It was expensive and a LOT of work setting up on location by myself. I am hoping the pictures will go towards my portfolio/online website. I have only uploaded 10 photos so far and sent a link to the family. They texted me back thanks but made no comment whether they liked them or not. Please give me your honest opinion of them. Link:

http://www.shutterfly.com/lightbox/view.sfly?fid=e4fc42ad646ad3826cdd16a80fdf8c46

The first image is with the D800e, the rest with the MarkIII. I am getting a new computer/monitor next week to handle the huge D800e files and make sure everything is calibrated properly. Thank you.