black and white portrait, c&c welcome

Started Jan 17, 2013 | Discussions thread
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Re: black and white portrait, c&c welcome
In reply to tomeee, Jan 17, 2013

umm, doesnt really work for me.

I think that composition and lightning both need work. Head/hair should not be cropped out of picture at least not by this little amount, and the other side of big brothers face is too dark as the little brother shades it.

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