Negative Space

papillon_65 wrote:

I think you've become lazy Louis. I've seen the original you're referring to many times and it's an excellent shot, much better than this one. The composition on this shot is all wrong and just doesn't work for me. Too closely cropped to the bottom and the central composition isn't working for this scene. I agree about breaking the rules but I think you got lazy with this one, and while the colours are great, the rest isn't for me. I think you need to shake things up a bit, I know you can take great shots but I think you've become a bit stale. You're much better than rehashing old shots. It might sound a bit harsh but I expect more from you, which is a testament to what you've previously produced and not criticism for the sake of it.

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