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Tony
In reply to tony field,
5 months ago
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tony field wrote:
l_objectif wrote:
...I very much like the interpretation. The surrealistic pointillism makes this into a very captivating portrait. Very nice choice of tonality and textire/
Two things bother me - there is a horizontal "white/light" line across her nose - I find my eyes drawn to this. The strong clarity of the lips/eyes do not seem to quite fit (this is noticeable when viewed "full size" however is much subdued when viewed small - visually I prefer it viewed small).
I wonder if the dark pointillism effect that is at "hair level" is appropriate? Seems to me that the area around the hair should be "lighter" and the area around the shoulders "darker" (i.e. as though you flipped the pointillism top to bottom)?
Just my musing on an excellent image.....
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tony
http://www.tphoto.ca
Thank you very much for your very constructive feedback! But to tell you the truth, when I started this "image", I just had a background that I liked and thought of doing something more "abstract"! I started from top and when I reached the eyes, I realized I was becoming more "Realistic" and it was hard to stay "Abstract!"... As you see, the hair is much more abstract!
Well, it kept me busy for a while!
All the best,
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Louis
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