Discuss and improve challenge - feedback request

Hi,  I set up a slightly different challenge where I invite feedback from anyone on the site. It's not just a discussion between the participants. I am asking you, if you can spare a few minutes, to take a quick look at the challenge, and provide critique if you have something constructive you could add to any of the photos.

Thanks and it's this challenge if interested..

http://www.dpreview.com/challenges/Challenge.aspx?ID=7680

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Barb