First pics from my new 16mm pancake

Started Oct 1, 2012 | Discussions thread
Shop cameras & lenses ▾
Regular MemberPosts: 276
Re: First pics from my new 16mm pancake
In reply to thesilverfox, Oct 3, 2012

thesilverfox wrote:

C&C Anyone?

Shots look nice!
C&C from an amateur:

1- looks good, although I might have tried a lower angle and get more of the steps in the frame

2- might have tried to get the camera closer to the sign looking down the wall more
3- Closer to the sign, reduce amount of train in foreground

4- Get closer to subject (bridge/beached boats) next time. Too much distraction in foreground and would have loved to see those beached boats up closer

5- I deff like this one. Just as a rule of thumb though, if your subject goes out of the frame, try frame it so it leaves one of the corners as opposed to one of the sides.
6- Nice dog shot! Perhaps a bit underexposed, but I do like this one for sure!

Keep shooting brother!

Reply   Reply with quote   Complain
Post (hide subjects)Posted by
Keyboard shortcuts:
FForum PPrevious NNext WNext unread UUpvote SSubscribe RReply QQuote BBookmark post MMy threads
Color scheme? Blue / Yellow