I need some ideas for this shot

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I need some ideas for this shot
Sep 2, 2012

I like this shot for its unusual mix of spectators along with the plane, but even after quite a lot of processing, I just can't get it to somewhere I really like. There was a lot of smoke in the air from the wildfires giving the dull gray look of the background, and of course it's a mostly gray plane. This is a processed version, but I'm looking for some ideas that make it look more dramatic and impressive without making it look obviously fake. I rarely post here, so I'm not sure what people are used to so I'm posting an already-processed image that's not horrible, but not that great either.

Larger: http://photos.imageevent.com/sipphoto/samplepictures/20D49107.jpg
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