Re - First time portrait using natural light

Hi after posting for help in another thread I decided to drop the 50s/60s theme and just try to get a half way decent shot. This is my first time taking a photograph of someone apart from the usual family snaps and the girl has never modelled before. I used only natural light from a window and a reflector, I shot them in raw and tried my best to pp them.

All cc welcome.

Carol