More grains and contrasts
Thank you all for writing!
@Rich cf. flickr
@David Thanks for your detailed feedback. I like what you've done in the 2nd one. I forgot to use the ND Filter - that's why it looks quite over exposed. Had I been a bit more knowledgable, I could've captured more details from the left side walls. Or it may be due to my inexperience with film scanning. Oh well, I'm learning from my mistakes.
Re the falling wall: I don't know, but for some reason I like it without tweaking the perspective.