Critique. If you will.

Started Jul 5, 2011 | Discussions thread
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Hooley
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Critique. If you will.
Jul 5, 2011

Hi All

This is my first time asking for a critique but please, don't hold back. While I was waiting for the bus to work this morning, with not much to do or think about, I found myself gazing into a play park that was empty. It was 7am after all. I then thought to myself, how sad play parks look when there is nobody in them enjoying them - particularly swings. Swings look especially depressed when not in motion and they need fun to come alive. So this evening, I visited the park and tried to capture my thoughts. To you, does this picture capture them. To me, it isn't quite what my thoughts had in mind. I think it needs less sun. You don't hear that very often. I feel that it needs a dull day to capture the depressed mood I was aiming for but I am interested to read what others think.

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