C&C: flowers in doorway

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C&C: flowers in doorway
Jun 5, 2010

Hi. Took these while waiting for my wife. Noticed these flowers and the corner, then tried to capture the reflection of the trees in the door. I should have come around to catch more of the door, but there was a flower bed to my right that I couldn't step in.

OOC JPEGs with my 35mm f/1.8.

I've put my own exposure self-flagellation below, but would appreciate composition feedback especially.
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Should have used smaller aperture. Flowers not all in focus.

Smaller aperture here, but still should have used smaller aperture.

Slightly smaller aperture, but now flowers not in focus.

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