help me light better

Hi,

My friend does not like these shots, altough they seem fine to me. I think it has to do with the way she looks too "cheeky", she said she wants to loose weight.

Would you have any advice in light or composition to make her face look slimmer ? Or any other comments on the shots is welcomed of course

btw, rated from 1 "snapshot" to 10 "magazine cover" how would you rate them ?

Thanks !