D3 and beautiful models Part 3

Started Oct 4, 2008 | Discussions thread
Vihao Pham
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The cigarette bothers me because...
In reply to Salman Hamid, Oct 5, 2008

1. It looks crumpled.

2. The ash on the tip is so long I'm wondering when it's going to fall off. It also gives the impression that she was just posing with the cigarette for a long time and doesn't actually smoke them.

3. The smoke looks like it's part of the background or was digitally inserted. Either way, it looks like a smudge.

Do you use a flash on the camera to set off your strobes? There's a faint catchlight in each eye in the first image and another one in the left eye of the second in the iris.

I don't want to sound nitpicky, but the images are excellent otherwise and these little things detract from that excellence.

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