Discussion challenge: Off Centered Subject

Challenge #58 in the Verbs , action, and misc topics series. Hosted by barb_s.
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Your subject should not be centered in the photo. Make use of framing and negative blank space. This challenge encourages discussion for improvement. Consider that the earlier you enter, the more likely your entry will receive critique. You, as well as any DP review member are encouraged to critique entries by adding comments on how you think images can be improved. The entrant, after reading comments may make modifications, and replace the first photo with a modified version of that photo if they think the suggestions have merit. When withdrawing an entry, all comments in a challenge are lost, therefore, BEFORE withdrawing, please copy & paste challenge comments to the original photo in your own gallery, (so they can be referenced later when people ask what they comments were and what you did for improvement). THEN withdraw, and immediately re-enter with your modified photo before the challenge goes to vote.
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Pegu #8
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A broken window of the historic Pegu Club in Yangon, Burma. This shot was part of series documenting the historic old building.
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Submitted: Monday, 16th December, 2013 02:40 (GMT)
Taken: Friday, 18th October, 2013
Focal length: 60 mm
Shutter speed: 1/500 sec
Aperture: F4.5
ISO: 640
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