Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules)

Challenge #29 in the Voter awareness.... series. Hosted by barb_s.
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Enter this challenge with a photograph containing 3 objects. It can be anything from a still life, to an outdoor shot, or action photo, but it must have 3 things in it. You, as well as any DP review member are encouraged to critique entries by adding comments on how you think the image could be improved. The entrant, after reading comments may opt to make modifications, and replace the first photo if they think the suggestions have merit. Simply upload a revised photo, please leave the original in your gallery, withdraw the first from this challenge, and immediately re-enter with your modified photo. this must be done before the challenge goes to vote.
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By Epix_de:I think the last apple is hidden a bit too much. Maybe the focus could be on the middle apple? By ysal :I would like it much more if the front apple is not cut off. Also clone out those green objects in the background. Nice shot. By znieh :If you rearrange it you could use a lower ISO. Only a suggestion, as the grain effect of the higher ISO may also be a wanted style. I like the green and the stipes looking into different directions. By santamonica812 : I'd like to see this image with the bottom of the front apple, but having it as is (ie, cut off) doesn't bother me. Is there any way to remove the reflection of the light source that is coming off the left (from our perspective) side of the front apple? That is a bit distracting. By Zhaark :Would like to see all 3 apples completely in the frame, with a full black background. Also arrange the apples in a straight diagonal line?? the suggestions i got
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Submitted: Wednesday, 26th December, 2012 07:33 (GMT)
Taken: Thursday, 19th April, 2012
Focal length: 105 mm
Shutter speed: 1/60 sec
Aperture: F5.6
ISO: 800
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