Discuss and Improve "3 objects" (Please read all rules)

Challenge #29 in the Voter awareness.... series. Hosted by barb_s.
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Enter this challenge with a photograph containing 3 objects. It can be anything from a still life, to an outdoor shot, or action photo, but it must have 3 things in it. You, as well as any DP review member are encouraged to critique entries by adding comments on how you think the image could be improved. The entrant, after reading comments may opt to make modifications, and replace the first photo if they think the suggestions have merit. Simply upload a revised photo, please leave the original in your gallery, withdraw the first from this challenge, and immediately re-enter with your modified photo. this must be done before the challenge goes to vote.
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Mr. Wolf What Time Is It?
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This is my 3rd submission based on wonderful feedback. My 2nd submission removed blur based on CG33's feedback. This submission removed (at much as possible) blueish light reflection that was pointed out by znieh. Thanks too to ysal for kind words. Hopefully a 3rd time will be the charm :-).
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Submitted: Friday, 21st December, 2012 20:12 (GMT)
Taken: Thursday, 20th December, 2012
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Shutter speed: 1 sec
Aperture: F1
ISO: 200
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