Negative space and chat

Challenge #12 in the Photo chat series. Hosted by AndrePooh, barb_s.
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Negative space : Subjects that are nicely composed against negative space backgrounds. Negative space is defined as the area of an image not occupied by shapes or forms. Not only the subject, but also the negative space should be interesting. See this google search: http://tinyurl.com/8xqn5em This is a complex challenge, please read the instructions and the and the comments first.*** Also enter a -dummy- photo as shown in the example below as a second picture. Then make comments about the compositions and arrangements and pp of the other photo's in this challenge. Eventually you can take and enter the second picture of your rearrangement of the same objects, by withdrawing the dummy photo.
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As per suggestions i reshoot the same and aligned it more as per rule of third(tried) and darken the background, also put the face more to left.Rest is upto all of you to make me better...
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Submitted: Wednesday, 29th February, 2012 18:57 (GMT)
Taken: Wednesday, 29th February, 2012
Focal length: 70 mm
Shutter speed: 1/25 sec
Aperture: F5
ISO: 200
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